In 2008 I began writing a story about a young girl growing up in the 1950s, sent by her father to live with relatives in Picayune, Mississippi, while her mother lies in the Touro Infirmary in New Orleans. Now, twelve years later, “Bobwhite” has been published by Five Points Journal. I’m honored that the story appears among the work of many fine writers and poets, including Terese Svoboda, Katherine Soniat, Barbara Hamby, and Heather Sellers, as well as artist William Gay. I’m grateful to my agent Valerie Borchardt and Five Points editor Megan Sexton, as well as the many friends and fellow writers who spent time reading and responding to beginning drafts, among them Lauren Inness Norton, A.J. Verdelle, Alicia Hyland, Laurie Foos, and Mark Fabiano.
This quiet story begins:
She’d turned nine in October of 1955, that year when presidents and mothers were sent to the hospital. Carly’s father called the president Dwight instead of President Eisenhower, and he called his wife Vivienne instead of Mrs. Robicheaux. Carly paid attention to what her father said, especially when he called her by her given name: Caroline. Especially when her mother was driven to the Touro Infirmary, and her father became a man of few words.
Here is a link to Five Points, Volume 19, Issue 3, if you’d like to buy a copy and read more. Gratitude all around for those who love and support the literary arts!
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